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Peace

02:08 May 11 2007
Times Read: 647


This story was 1st place in my coven's contest.







Peace





“Sweet, are the thoughts that run through my mind

My heart

One moment’s peace

One glimpse of your world

Just one moment

Then it’s gone

Slashed in two by a devils blade

By this evil called conscience”



A girl awakens, screaming as if in great pain. Dark, every thing is so dark. She can’t see a thing. Raising her head she notices a faint light coming from a small window. Struggling to move she realizes she has been restrained. “Oh yes… my little white jacket with the long arms…..Ha! Ha! Ha! I’m still in my cage. Still I am held prisoner by the demons in the white lab coats. FOOLS! All of them are fools” she yells.



The girl in the corner of the thickly padded room pulls her knees up towards her chest then rests her head down upon her boney little knees. Whispering, she begins to speak to some that simply is not there.



“I tried to tell them of your coming. Of the world you will create. But no… can’t believe the crazy girl. “Poor thing as just lost her mind” they say. “Let’s lock her up” then they feed me these pretty pieces of poison, like I don’t understand the difference between the real world and fantasy land. If only they could see the things you show me. See the beauty of your Hell on earth. You are so miss understood. And they have no clue what you’re bringing to us, real peace. Not false hope. Not the damnation they claim, filthy liars. They are the ones that deceive us. Shove the promise of love and tranquility down our throats. The very thought makes me sick!”

“It’s so hard waiting for you…I feel so alone in my battle to free you my sweet master. But for now I have my dreams. I can be with you there and those fuckers can’t touch me”.

Slowly the girl stands and moves closer to the little window in the steel door. Peering out, she can see the “doctors” doing their rounds.

Stepping back she lets out a haunting scream and runs toward the door once again

Not stopping to look this time, but smashing her already scared face into the glass as hard as she can. With a sinister grin upon her now bleeding face, she tries to do it once more

But the evil lab coated lackeys have taken notice and opened the door. Falling into the arms of one she giggles with anticipation at what is to come next. She does not bother to fight them as they stab her with the needles, but gives a deep sigh of sweet relief. She drifts back into the realm of dreams as they drag her back to the mattress on the floor. Now she lays there with a sweet, almost innocent smile upon her face. The doctors leave the room. One stops to close the door, shaking his head he says: “It’s so hard to believe that little girl is responsible for over two thousand deaths”. The door is locked tight and the girl has one more moment of peace….



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Angelus
Angelus
23:58 Apr 22 2008

..damn well written: with an end I liked.





TaintedAngel14
TaintedAngel14
21:52 Oct 11 2008

Wow, its very detailed, and I enjoyed it alot, though the ending surprised me, it was a good surprise! I absolutly loved it!





 

Falling in Love

02:07 May 11 2007
Times Read: 649


This poem won me my 1st year of premium membership.









Falling in Love



I am being hunted

I can feel him following me every where I go

Smell the putrid stench of love that envelopes him

Feel his eyes watching me

Burning into my flesh as he takes his aim

Panicked I look for him

I know he’s close

There

I see him

His evil smile

The shine of his stinger

His arrow

Run away

That is what I must do



Hide from his evil intent to infect me with the deadly poison of love

I must not fall victim of this disease again

So I run

Heart racing

My fear raising

Like an animal he stalks me

Smells my fear

Hears my heart

Run

Run for my life

My sanity

I can no longer see where I am going

The tears have blinded me



Please

Not again

I will not survive this torture

Not this time

Shit!

Dead end

No way out

Turning I put my back against the wall

Wipe the tears from my eyes

Blink

Then focus on the bringer of my destruction

Horrified

I try to scream but no sound escapes from my mouth

I cant breath

He looms over me like the shadow of death

I cant move

The fear has frozen me



So I watch in horror as he pulls back his arrow

Holding it

He winks at me

Then lets it go

And all I can do is watch

Petrified

Watch as the poison races toward my heart

I feel the impacted

The flesh parting

Providing a clear path

Then plunging hard into my heart

The tears now run red

Falling against the wall

I reach for the arrow

Trying to pull it out

But my arms fail me

I can feel the venom coercing through my body

Burning every cell



Nothing left

It has all gone now

Sliding to the ground I can see his confusion

Am I the first?

Has he never seen this before?



Grounding himself, he bends down on one knee and pulls me into his arms

He looks so puzzled

I reach up and touch his face

Wet

Is he crying?



With my last breath I struggle to speak

Do not cry for me. I have done this to myself. I have chosen death over the pain of love.

He looks so fragile

Like a child made of glass that could shatter at any moment



My strength fading I go limp in his arms

Leaning down he kisses me then whispers in my ear

I know not what in your life made you give up on love.

But I hope that in the next life love will find you and make you happy.

With that I close my eyes and drift away into the darkness

Free of my mortal coil

Free of the tortures of love and life



© Angel of Blood 2004


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